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My Portrait 2

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Photographer: David Hebditch
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Image size
3744x5616px 15.3 MB
Make
Canon
Model
Canon EOS-1Ds Mark III
Shutter Speed
1/256 second
Aperture
F/18.0
Focal Length
135 mm
ISO Speed
200
Date Taken
Mar 6, 2009, 5:57:21 PM
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HametsuNoCharge's avatar
:star::star::star::star: Overall
:star::star::star::star::star-half: Vision
:star::star::star::star::star: Originality
:star::star::star::star::star-empty: Technique
:star::star::star::star::star-empty: Impact

First of all, you are a very pretty girl. If i make any unwarrented comments i beg your forgiveness. It is an allurign picture.

Now then Colors:
-not exactly too much i can comment on (lolz) but I will say that the gradual darkenign of the back gorund is a great effect. And I like the dark you've placed around the eyes. However, the face is rather lacking the shadows that would normal allow the nose to be distinguished form the rest of the face. Quite frankly, as of the moemnt, I have to sit on the floor and look at my screen from a sharp incline angle to see your nose at all. On the other hand, thel ow visibilty of the nose gives off a very ghostly pallor to your face and makes you look almost doll like. I also liek the interesting gray patterns the satin (?) flower gives, but it does draw wuite a bit of attention away from you. It's nice though.

Placement:
Almost flawless. If there was even one thing I could say anythig nabout, I'd maybe put the floower a tad closer to the middle, or maybe just somehow place at least a little more gray a little further leff just ot balance out the picture a little.

Proportions:
No faults are to be found

Computer quality, excellent. the lines of the photo are smooth and it is not the least bit grainy anywhere.

Over all, it's a beautiful picture. It invokes a mysterious mischieviousness that is characteristic of a spirited personality trapped in the ordinary buzz of everyday life.